Friday, 8 March 2013

Harley

On world book day we wrote a story in litracy 
my story is about a doughnut called Curly ob.How lives in disney land paris!!!!.Here is my STORY!!!!!.

                    CURLY THE DOUGHNUT!!!!!

One sunny day Curly was in his normal  sweet shop on the beach.Curlys favorite place was the beach next to the sweet shop.


every night he goes out of the sweet shop to look at the amazing night beach but one day it was not such a good night for him ......



He was on the beach and a human came along but the beach was ment to be closed so to coer him self he bered him self in the sand.


The human steped on Curly and all the sand got stuck to him.


All the sweets heard Curlys scream and rushed out to see if every thing was ok but it was not.


Curly had broken legs broken arms it was dredful.


He went moldey and sea gulls ate him it was sad for everyone.


BY HARLEY!!!!!  



                           










2 comments:

adrian said...

this guy is awsome

harley said...

i love Curly the doughnut story